October 4, 2009

Something I've been working on


So basically, I've been working on this poem for weeks now. It was the first week of classes and I'm sitting in my Sociology class, bored out of my mind when this random idea for a poem pops into my head. I thought I could write this poem using our senses and how we would describe our love for someone. I decided on using our sense of touch, sight and speakin. I know speaking isnt one of our five senses but i thought of a really cool line that I could use for our speech. Well, I've been working on it since then and I think I'm sort of finally finished with it. Here it is:

I wish I could touch you
Such smooth, creamy skin, soft and pure like the body of a newborn baby
Deeling the curves of your body, that of which my hands roam over, memorizing every part of you
To lay my weary head against your broad shoulders, where in your arms, I feel so truly at peace

I wish I could see you
The glowing ambiance that emitts from you luscious, beautiful hair
To be able to look in the windows of your soul, a soul as deep as a never-ending abyss
The smile that brightens even the evil, darkest minds

I wish I could tell you
With every word you utter, I hear the voice of an angel whispering sweet nothings into my ear
The way you laugh sounds like the chiming of melodic bells playing in the air
By letting you know that by just being with you, my whole world has become unraveled, leaving you as the center of my life, my everything

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